Hi. Our job here was to write a poem
After a long and tiring day
I go back to do same.
The trees never change,
A car that's always there,
And that house it's still on sale...
I remember the rules:
"Don't go that way, no vibration mode,
watch my back, and be careful."
I carry lot's of heavy books in my back,
Thinking what I have to do for next class...
And finnaly when I arrive home,
I realise that this is a circuit that can't stop...
Awesome poem Mateo!
ResponderBorrarYou´ve done some great work on rhyme and a great use of vocabulary as well. It´s very interesting that you have included your parents´voice in your poem, it´s a great auditory image to picture you with this voices in your head.
Congratulations on your writing skills!!
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